Lost Souls - Chapter 16
Chapter 16 Ellie meets her Gramma. And the test of her family.EnjoyMaryK“Ellie,” Heath said sharply. “Heath, please. She doesn’t understand.” Victoria interrupted her youngest son’s chastisement of...
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Good work Mary K. You've shown us how close to the surface Heath's formerly buried feelings have become.
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Sure hope Heath can heal and Megan can stop being so insecure and treat him with more warmth.
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Ellie is such a sweet child, defending her father a lady that made him cry. Ellie's innocent question about getting another mother has devestated Heath. Heath so much still in love with Sarah it still...
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The pending conversation between Nick and Megan should prove to be a lively one. And Heath ... poor guy. Even if he regains his entire family, what he has lost is irreplaceable. Yet it's good he may...
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I hope Megan will come around and not feel threaten by Heath's arrival. Emotional moment with Heath grieving for Sarah.
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I can understand Megan's attitude toward Heath. Here is a man she has never met but who let his family think he was dead all these years with no contact. Being Nick's wife and loving him as much as...
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Oh it's a chapter very touching, Mary. My heart bleeds to see Heath like that so fragile. I hope his family will be able to help him about his pain.
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Although Nick had no idea what had happened to cause his brother such pain it was clear Heath was battling not to break down completely. Struggling to compose himself Heath ground out two words. “Take...
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A wonderful chapter, Mary K, from Megan's frenemy act to Ellie's innocent blunder into Heath's broken heart. You handled the whole "Grandma" issue with tact and sensitivity. Even with Heath home, the...
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Ellie’s next words were like a knife cutting into Heath’s heart. “Me get ‘nother mama?” He would never have believed that a child’s innocent question could cause so much pain. Whatever she asks we’ll...
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A very heart-felt chapter, MaryK. I hope being "home" can help Heath move forward and I'm glad that Ellie has come to accept her new grandmother a little bit. But Megan worries me.
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